Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is better to choose a university whose graduates have good job opportunities than a university who has famous professors. Use specific examples to support your answer.
Education is one of the key words of our time. A poorly-educated man, many of us believe, is an unfortunate victim of adversity, deprived of one of the greatest opportunities. When it comes to whether we shall choose to study in a university that ensure rosy career prospects or the counterpart that owns prestigious professors, people hold divergent views. As I see it, however, there is always preferable and feasible to attend those universities that have reputable professors. What should be prioritized is that attending universities with well-known professors, instead of choosing universities whose graduates have good job opportunities, not only brings good grades, but also novel learning methods, such as leadership, communication skills, time managing skills and planning skills. Initially, what you can never lose sight of is the importance of good professors in a college. To be specific, famous professors are the essential part of college system. They are responsible to impart the methodology of research to the next generation in order to maintain and exceed the existed human knowledge. In a university, the duty of a professor is not only to teach but also to teach a person, and even to cultivate the responsibility and ability to enter the society in the future. Moreover, the professor will teach you how to deal with problems. As the Chinese saying goes, it is better to teach a person to fish than to give him a fish. Therefore, a good professor will teach you better skills rather than bring you a better future, which requires you to work hard with what you have learned, including your future career. Without a good learning foundation, good learning methods and habits, it is difficult to stand on the workplace in the future. In detail, my aunt chose the school he liked because she could study medicine with the famous professor he liked. Now through the discussion and opinions between her and the professor, she not only has good grades and a job after graduation, but also has a whole set of skills, so that she runs a clinic by herself and keeps working hard with the method of teachers.
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Secondly, studying with a famous professor can improve my reputation. A famous professor in the profession is certainly of interest, and his words are persuasive, not to mention his teaching. Therefore, a student who graduates in his department must also be competent. Meanwhile, because of the teacher's background, they will definitely have a good position in this major, which is also very helpful for their work. Compared to the university where graduates have good jobs, maybe they are self ability to highlight or their family members work for they paved the road, while looking for an all well-known professor of the university, for students, is guaranteed to learn professional knowledge and exceptional skills, this will make students graduate in the future have the ability to make their own society, find their own excellent work. For example, when my father was studying in Jiaoda University, he met a professor who was very famous in finance. My father followed him to learn financial management and marketing. I learned a lot of personal insights from him, which helped him to see and solve problems differently from others, and also made him stand out in his performance. After graduation, many companies offered her a job because of her father's way of doing things and academic background. So a university with good professors will give you more visibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2941.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 580.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07068965517 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95464074 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508620689655 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 912.6 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7691343437 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.64 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291452634671 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748318852972 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617077289592 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227320460016 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049307055874 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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