Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing with the rising population. As per the research done by Times of India, crimes are high in places where there is more unemployment. However, there is an argument whether there should be a fixed penalty or, every breach should be evaluated individually, and accordingly, the criminal should be charged. In this essay, we will discuss both the sides and then will share my opinion.
On one hand, it is argued that each type of crime should have a pre-decided set of charges which should be applicable to the offender. If a person commits a heinous act no matter what the reasons are, it is a crime and should be treated strictly and equally. To explain it better, if an individual steals from anyone, they should be treated as a criminal and get a fixed punishment as all other robbers may get for robbery. As a result, this will give equal treatment to all the foul-committer, irrespective of their background, gender, and social status.
On the other hand, many others believe that every crime has a reason, and considering it, the criminal should be dealt with. Moreover, an unfortunate act could be a result of self-defense, or someone could have been forced to do it, or the person had no intention of harm and it could be an accident. For example, if a young woman walking down the street alone is attacked by a robber and she, in self-defense pushes the robber away, resulting, the robber gets an injury beyond recovery. Therefore, such actions cannot be judged equally to an act where a person intends to hurt another person for revenge.
To conclude, in my opinion, every act of crime should be evaluated by considering the circumstances, intend, and background of the unfortunate event. Consequently, landing on the charges and penalties to be implied on the suspect held for the heinous act. Hence, implying a fixed set of charges will be unfair to the victim of circumstance and innocent who landed into trouble without and bad intension.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81286549708 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81137575899 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7648074513 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392511503626 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125061173361 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088759271127 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240407031764 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678468619688 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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