Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Owing to modernization, fuels are much important for providing transport and power our city. While, new replacement for fossil fuels is somewhat inevitable, some people believe that new alternatives such as solar panels can be too expensive; others maintain that they can be more profitable with the development of technology. I firmly believe that fossil fuels cause several damages to our environment and altering with new one is necessary.
Since 100 years ago, fossil fuels consumption has been rocketing sharply, which can bring serious concerns to our life. Firstly, it has been credited that those fuels such as oil and gas are an important source of CO2 in atmosphere. As can be noticed, this is a green-house gas which can directly cause the earth to be warm up. Increasing earth temperature means increasing in ice-pole fusion and consecutively uprising of sea levels which could be impact on the life of islanders. The second noteworthy issue is that the fossil fuels for transportation are source of harmful ingredients such as NO, NO2. These gases result in detrimental effects on human body.
Nowadays, new source of power are developing which are less-harmful and even inexpensive rather than the traditional one. These technologies are more environmentally-friendly which means reduction in producing dangerous gases. As a prime example, as far as I know, solar power just needs the infinite power of the sun and some panels to attract beams. In this method, there is no ignition and therefor no concern about the side effects of gases production. Besides, it can be set up even in a roof of small house and there would not be any need to a huge process plant.
All in all, fortunately, humanity's concern about fossil fuels has been increasing and substitution for new power is a controversy. I should reaffirm my position that consumption of traditional fuels must be limited as much as possible. This would be likely to do if the technology of other source of power will be more developed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04504504505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06430228716 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1692890564 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8235294118 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134697195612 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468190637341 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418548403501 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888529845266 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146137418029 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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