A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
Tell your friend you understand the problem
Explain what happened to you in the past
Suggest possible solutions to the problem
Dear Harry,
I hope you are doing well. I got your letter yesterday and I understood your problem which you have mentioned in your letter. I am writing this letter to share some advice and my experience as I have already faced a similar situation.
You’ve mentioned in your letter that your organization isn’t ready to hike your salary even after three consistent years. I faced this type of circumstance in my previous organization. I did put too much effort into my work yet they weren’t convinced to hike my salary. At that time, I talked to my manager and other respective authorities. I showed them that I‘ve been a loyal, hardworking, and deserving candidate for this raise. I convinced them why they should give me a raise with the help of figures and profitable facts of my previously done tasks. After one or two meetings they understood that I deserve hike in my wages.
I’ll suggest you make a list of remarkable tasks which you’ve achieved. Try to convince your manager and explain your situation. I’m sure they will hear you out. Just in case if they are no not ready to give you any raise or any kind of appreciation then don’t be in a nutshell because there are infinite opportunities available in the market.
I hope my suggestion will help you to make a wise decision. I will keep my finger crossed and hope that everything will work out best for you.
Best Regards,
Zeisha
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to hike'
Suggestion: to hike
...meetings they understood that I deserve hike in my wages. I’ll suggest you make a l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7031772072 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9722171246 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7058823529 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58823529412 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295230921857 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954727234403 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997995153904 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206050341095 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101654173828 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to hike'
Suggestion: to hike
...meetings they understood that I deserve hike in my wages. I’ll suggest you make a l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7031772072 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9722171246 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7058823529 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58823529412 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295230921857 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954727234403 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997995153904 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206050341095 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101654173828 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.