You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems
for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
-advising them of your situation.
-explain how this is affecting you.
-request a new card.
Dear Mr.Johnson,
I am a final year student from the Computer Science department. I am writing this letter to make a request to issue a new Identification Card for me as I have lost my ID-card.
Last week, when I was travelling back to my home from the College by Train, Due to peak hours, the train was over-crowded. When I arrived at my home, I noticed that my wallet in which I had some money and a college ID-card was not with me. I tried hard to find my wallet and student identification card. However, all my efforts were obsolete.
I am worried because my mid-semester examination will start in just a few weeks. It is obligatory for the students to have a student identification card to appear in the exam. As you can see, I will not be able to appear in the exam. Therefore, I would like to make a request for a new ID-card. It would be highly appreciated if you could manage to provide a new Card this weekend.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention. I look forward to a prompt response at the earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Krishna Parmar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Johnson
Dear Mr.Johnson, I am a final year student from the ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51776649746 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86685659874 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4803269148 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5714285714 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335111226854 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112696596088 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102976383596 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191661850058 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891062946055 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.