You and your friend booked a theatre ticket in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theatre with him.
Dera Kia,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health. It was a really sweet gesture for you to buy a movie for both of us but sadly, I won't be able to come.
I really wanted to watch the movie with you as it's our favourite actor's last movie. I'm aware of how expensive the ticket was and you really wanted me to come but I'm feeling a bit under the weather hence, I won't be able to come. I caught a cough and cold.
As I won't be able to make, why don't you ask Rahul to come with you? He is a cinephile and I think he would love to come with you. If Rahul agrees to come with you then you won't have to go alone. I am really sorry for the inconvenience and I hope you won't mind.
I hope you have a good time with Rahul and will see you soon.
Best regards,
Krish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y wanted to watch the movie with you as its our favourite actors last movie. Im awa...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...as its our favourite actors last movie. Im aware of how expensive the ticket was a...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...as and you really wanted me to come but Im feeling a bit under the weather hence, ...
^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d cold. As I wont be able to make, why dont you ask Rahul to come with you? He is a...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I think he would love to come with you. If Rahul agrees to come with you then you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 609.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.80625 4.54256449028 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.88984746408 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.110604309 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3636363636 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20417947199 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912625522091 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626091163395 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141484304959 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504597233555 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 8.37731958763 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.23 8.71597938144 49% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.91 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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