You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The following bar graph represents type of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and different age group.The three different form of music such as Pop music,rock music as well as classical music which are bought by percentage people are reperesented in following graph.
It is obeserved from graph that nearly 30 percentage of male purcahsed rock music rather than pop music and classical music.Similarly, percentage of female and age group of 35-44 remained nearly equal in purchasing pop music and rock music and demand for classical music subsequentially decreased.The popularity for Pop and rock music remains statistically nearly equal for age group of 16-24.
The demand for Pop music and rock music were same but as compared to other age group demand for classical music was found to be higher in case of age group between 25-34.From graph,it clearly is observed that classical music affection was clearly seen in age group of above 45 nearly 20%
Therefore,different people with respective age has different affection towards music.As Pop music, rock music as well as classical music have different type tunes and style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...assical music subsequentially decreased.The popularity for Pop and rock music remai...
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...gher in case of age group between 25-34.From graph,it clearly is observed that class...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27567567568 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97991327497 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.4926829268 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5738384011 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 325.333333333 112.824112599 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6666666667 22.9334400587 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6666666667 5.23603664747 357% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173269320574 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149693338906 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380483834412 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132484675133 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406110174922 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.2329268293 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 61.2550243902 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.3012195122 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.9970731707 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.