An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed material like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own experience.?
As we move into the 21st century, technology is affecting different areas of life and education is no exception. There are a large number of schools that are providing computers to their students for effective learning, by completely changing the old traditional methods of teaching from hard copies such as providing books and assignments. This new approach has multiple benefits, but also has significant drawbacks.
The first and the foremost merit of introducing computers into classrooms is that the students are more likely to be well versed with the technology. To be more clear, in this tech-savvy era every younger should know how to make the best use of electronic devices, particularly in studies. Secondly, the fewer papers are used in the academic institutes, more the trees will be saved. This means that, due to the large requirement of paper, approximately thousands of trees are cut down, in order to produce a single roll of a paper. Thus, saving the environment from these green practices.
Moving further, there are also some major drawbacks to this practice, firstly, due to the continuous usage of laptops in school; resulting in the poor visibility of young children. Explaining in detail, as the blue rays that are emitted from the screen of computers are considered to be very harmful to the human eyes, wearing spectacles is the main reason amongst children. Moreover, some students find it very stressful to read on e-devices, and eventually lose their interest in studies. As most of their batchmates in different schools are still studying with traditional ways of teaching.
In conclusion, after discussing both the pros and cons in detail, I opine by saying that there are major benefits of choosing laptops for study which outshine some of the negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nd education is no exception. There are a large number of schools that are providing computers to...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntually lose their interest in studies. As most of their batchmates in different s...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...oosing laptops for study which outshine some of the negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15753424658 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82872566224 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9056024444 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175691037856 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510048114615 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496183107889 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946022083632 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425252033091 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.