You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam
My name is john and I am a student of bachelor of arts 1st year in college. I am writing this letter to you to request new student identification card as I lost my old one last week.
I was in arts building last week as I had to attend some lecture there. I had my card till noon when I had my economics exam but when I left college and was on my way to bus stop I found out that it was not in my pockets and even not in wallet. I think I probably dropped it somewhere, I even asked lost and found department whether anyone deposit it there but no one did.
Right now I am in challenging situation. My exam is schedule to held next week for rest of the subject and for preparation I need to borrow some books from library but for that I need student card which I dropped by mistake. Even on test date I need student card to sit for an exam.
So, I am requesting you to please provide me new card as soon as possible. I would like to thank you in advance for my help.
Your sincerely
john
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam My name is john and I am a student of bachelor of arts 1...
^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one last week. I was in arts building last week as I had to attend some lectur...
^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as I had to attend some lecture there. I had my card till noon when I had my eco...
^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y economics exam but when I left college and was on my way to bus stop I found ou...
^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t in my pockets and even not in wallet. I think I probably dropped it somewhere, ...
^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deposits'.
Suggestion: deposits
...ost and found department whether anyone deposit it there but no one did. Right now ...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advance for my help. Your sincerely john
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.039408867 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36220123219 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2599852338 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264677725759 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106525610932 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108630601883 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166486900205 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960345540208 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam My name is john and I am a student of bachelor of arts 1...
^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one last week. I was in arts building last week as I had to attend some lectur...
^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as I had to attend some lecture there. I had my card till noon when I had my eco...
^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y economics exam but when I left college and was on my way to bus stop I found ou...
^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t in my pockets and even not in wallet. I think I probably dropped it somewhere, ...
^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deposits'.
Suggestion: deposits
...ost and found department whether anyone deposit it there but no one did. Right now ...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advance for my help. Your sincerely john
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.039408867 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36220123219 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2599852338 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264677725759 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106525610932 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108630601883 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166486900205 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960345540208 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.