The number of residents and nonresident visitors to the city centre

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The number of residents and nonresident visitors to the city centre.

The graph illustrates how many locals and outsiders visited the City Center by a car as a mode of transportation.

Overall, Although a large number of residents visit the City Centre in a car with a gradual increase in the number of non-residents, this numbers waved and decreased with the introduction of parking meters and traffic in the region.

Looking at the details, it is clear that natives visiting the City Centre were the highest between 1996 and 1999, the figures slightly fluctuating between 9000 and 10,000 visitors whereas the numbers for non-native show a substantial increase starting from about 5000 in 1996 rising to just below 8000 in 1999.
However, after the implication of parking meters, the former dropped drastically to about 4500 and varied up to 5000, the latter remained nearly unchanged.

On the other hand, the data for both plunged as a result of traffic, and closure of Wastegate Street and Park Lane. Figures ranged between 3000 to 5000, the lowest of both categories from the years 2003 to 2005.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of transportation. Overall, Although a large number of residents visit the City Centre in a ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, whereas, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01156069364 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69142035482 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9935062197 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22550288105 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841652733706 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107107229071 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100998328045 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109846437563 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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