The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We live in a world wherein modern and contemporary technologies are improving every minute. There is an abundance of social media, various websites and apps, simply speaking - internet . After having tried use this magical thing in the every day live, mankind began know a new cultures sitting at home, instead of taste all charms of life by themselves. In my estimation, this trend has been developing in our society indeed. This essay will provide some examples to support this current point of view.
To begin with, there is an consideration that there are a lot of different programmes which tell people about various countries, cultures, places and cities. A good picture, good sound, breath-taking views and fascinating stories are encountered in these TV programmes, for instance, "Heads and tails". People simply do not need money and required opportunities so that they see something incredible, unexplored, overwhelming and interesting. Not only do not people need to fly to other countries, but also they do not have to spend a lot of their own leisure and pastime. Only thing they need is to turn on a television and enjoy watching.
Mankind has become more lazy, if to compare with the past, and it is a reliable fact. If we had not invented so many various state-of-the-art technologies, we would have more health, fit and "social" level of society. It can be noticeable that society has become more antisocial and rude in some moments. Hence, some people simply do not own friends and close people to travel around the world. Therefore, they would prefer to sit on the internet and discover a wonderful world using a phone, instead of traveling alone and feeling full solitude.
In conclusion, it can be inferred that having using the internet has influenced people's types of travelling indeed. I believe that there is a negative impact on society of this trend and we must face the music and do something with this current issue. If we do not do something, we will travel offline and it will be horrific for the economical and general state of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91565311 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8815322525 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193714407488 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593651163505 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668176347167 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116330879814 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530030161423 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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