University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are increasing numbers of students preferring to study in a foreign country. Although studying abroad can give students knowledge and experience cultures from different country, they also need to learn how to deal with homesickness, and expensive school fees. In my opinion, students study in a foreign country will have a remarkable experience.
The great benefit of studying abroad is that students will have more opportunities to meet people from diverse nationalities. Overseas students are exposed to different cultures and customs that create the perfect learning environment. For example, when I studied in Australia, I was joined various group activities such as exercise and cooking classes. This has given me the experience of working with people from different backgrounds and cultures. Therefore, studying abroad gives students an excellent platform to understand the other customs and cultures in the world.
The main challenge that students face while overseas will be difficult because of the expensive fees and dealing with homesickness. Living alone in an unfamiliar country can cause students to miss family and the city where they grew up, especially when they are sick or need help. Moreover, in order to afford the expensive fees, they might need to find a job to make the lives easier, which cause hard to concentrate on study. However, students who an eager to study abroad must build up the ability to overcomes these difficult situations.
Studying overseas has become increasingly common for foreign students. Even though the students can experience homesickness and pay costly fees. I believe that determination and persistence can lead to them gaining an extraordinary experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49438202247 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9273778169 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1237970662 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290761564567 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109853363102 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925791523777 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189711819276 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773775118043 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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