Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
The author of arguments fails to justify his/her stance on numerous instances. Firstly, If the people of Plainsville are already leading healthy lives they could be adapting to a number of healthy habits like yoga or exercises. Secondly, The merchants are just highlighting the fact of the products related to exercise, that clearly does not imply that they would buy Nature's way products which are mostly food and health related products. Further, the term used in the argument "health related product" is very eclectic because of the range of products that can bear that tag. Thirdly, more memebers in local health club, wieght traning and aerobics classes imlly that for some unstated reason the people of of Plainville perhaps possess all the neccessities for leading a "healthy" lifestyle.
The term healthy lives in the argument provides a broad range depending on the understanding of an individual. For the author healthy life maybe associated with health food and related products where as the people of Plainville instead of cutting on their natural diet focus more on the activites part for maintaining good health. Hence , the author fails to provide more context to clear out a reader 's doubt , the fact stated is susceptible to numeorus interpreatations. Therefore, this fact does not support author's conclusion.
From the argument one can certainly deduce that excercise gear businness would probably be profitable in Plainville. But there is no evidence given by the author to justify that Nature's Way is selling those gears. Even if we asssume that Nature' way is indeed selling those gears, still the author would need proof to justify that the people of Plainsville will switch to Nature's way products compared to merchants products. Hence, author leaves many unanswered questions.
The surge in local health club members, weight training and aerobic classes being full again does not provide sufficient evidence to secure that Nature's ville will be profitable. Surely, sport centers and classes are making a fortune. Further the program introduced for schoolchildren is a "fitness for life" program. It doesn't imply that the children will start to consuming health food and "other health related products is still open to interpretation.
Since, the author of the argument fails to validates the deduction in support of his/her conclusion, the conclusion is perhaps unwarranted.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1975 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.157 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.642 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.218 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.536 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 718, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...hat for some unstated reason the people of of Plainville perhaps possess all the necc...
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Line 1, column 784, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ossess all the neccessities for leading a 'healthy' lifestyle. The t...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...d with health food and related products where as the people of Plainville instead of cut...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... part for maintaining good health. Hence , the author fails to provide more contex...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re context to clear out a reader s doubt , the fact stated is susceptible to numeo...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... From the argument one can certainly deduce that excercise gear businness wo...
^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... argument one can certainly deduce that excercise gear businness would probably ...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rogram introduced for schoolchildren is a 'fitness for life' program. I...
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...apos;fitness for life' program. It doesnt imply that the children will start to c...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducts is still open to interpretation. Since, the author of the argument fails ...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'validate'.
Suggestion: validate
...ce, the author of the argument fails to validates the deduction in support of his/her con...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... conclusion is perhaps unwarranted.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 381.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43307086614 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92115414594 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543307086614 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0738325011 57.8364921388 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24156528426 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702951808126 0.0743258471296 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07633699095 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124501309634 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703608856865 0.0628817314937 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.5979740519 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 98.500998004 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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