The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake’s water
The article states that there are several methods to prevent the trend that is endangered the lake's qualities. However, the professor explains that the ways mentioning in the passage are great idea, but are unrealistic and impractical, and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that special desalination equipment would be helpful in direct removal of salt from the lake's water. the professor refutes this point by stating that desalination of lake water would be make serious problem and it's actually a risky afford. she illustrated that other solid materials such as the Selenium dissolved by desalination facility have a toxic quality and people who living near lake breathing it and it leads to a disastrous event in lake.
Second, the article claims that dilution of the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean is another option. However, the professor contends that reducing salinity requires the constructing a huge pipe line
from the ocean to lake, not only is it very expensive, but also have not enough financial source in order to accomplishing such a massive project.
Third, the reading avers that controlling salinity of lake's water by constructing walls and dividing aquatics into several section would be a firm solution to problem. the lecturer opposes this points by saying that this project unlikely will not successful in long term due to geology activity, to be specific the earthquake, maybe this solution is better in short time, but this wall will be destructed and the water in lake's will be mixed together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t removal of salt from the lakes water. the professor refutes this point by stating...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...roblem and its actually a risky afford. she illustrated that other solid materials ...
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Line 8, column 116, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'several sections'.
Suggestion: several sections
...ucting walls and dividing aquatics into several section would be a firm solution to problem. th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...on would be a firm solution to problem. the lecturer opposes this points by saying ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12790697674 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65005473467 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1314274283 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 110.228320801 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251763093537 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116287541813 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686340150554 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130991653007 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653417618146 0.0443174109184 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.3589403974 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.