If you want to choose a purpose, which one do you choose?
Helping other people
Enhancing time management
Improving physical well-being and eating healthy food
Notwithstanding that some people may find helping people and being healthy more crucial in life rather than developing time management skills, I am of the conviction that improving time controlling is a better aim in life to achieve. I feel this way due to a couple of reasons that I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, these days are busy days for every single person with loads of tensions and concerns, hence, no one can deal with all these works without obtaining the ability of time managing. I should admit that my opinion is influenced by my personal experiences. When I enrolled at the university, I had a lot of things to do that made me anxious. I had to move my stuff to the dormitory, continue the process of registering in university, participating in my classes, and so on. I would not able to handle all these without having the skill of time organizing. Fortunately, I used to choose to improve my dominate on time as a goal from years ago, therefore I passed all those tasks properly.
Moreover, When someone puts controlling the time as an aim in life, it gradually helps her or him to find some wasted and free time during the day and then, try to cultivate them optimally for other purposes in life.
For instance, after I gain the skill of organizing time, I started to contribute to charities and volunteer work, So I could nail another purpose in my life. I think successful people use this strategy to do all these off-topic activities all together at a limited time.
To sum up, In my mind, it is a much better notion to look at time managing as the most significant purpose in life. It is because this issue is more needed now and it allows you to use your leisure time to get involved in other activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58359621451 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75998736898 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3899586127 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202202209615 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061694050666 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524601456272 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11085971059 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325740740618 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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