Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports have always been a form of entertainment and sports competitions are popular all over the world. However, when it comes to being a host country of an international sports event, there are considerable debate around the advantages and disadvantages. While I accept some obvious negative aspects of this trend, I firmly believed that these are outweighed by the benefits.
On the one hand, it is clear that hosting a global sports event would bring about several drawbacks. One evident weakness is that it would cost the host country a lot of money. For example, in order to prepare for the Summer Olympics in Tokyo, Japan has allocated a great proportion of national budget to the construction and maintenance. Another reason is that being a host country would attract more unwanted attention. To illustrate, some people would argue that the judges’ decisions were unfair or the native athletes cheated which is totally unfounded.
On the other hand, I argue that the negative aspects of this trend would prove to be more important. First, hosting an international sports competition would help promote a country culture to the world. For instance, the nation itself would become the center of attention and this could be the golden opportunity to enhance cultural promotion. Besides, the athletes of a host country could be mentally stable. To illustrate, they would not need to travel such long distance to compete or get distracted by estrange factors including environment, food, etc. Therefore, competitors of host country could be confident and focus on training and stand a good chance of winning.
To conclude, there are minus points to hosting an international sports event including a large amount required of money and unwanted attention. However, it seems to me that the benefits would be more significant regarding cultural promotion and mental stability of athletes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24671052632 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86043522588 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.932675758 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284422050059 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103498917053 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848467098532 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188964264401 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277765048286 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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