Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals
What is the need of zoos? Poor animals are captivated in small confinements and treated poorly. They are fed in cages which lead to their inability to learn hunting in the wild. They are caged and kept away from their natural habitat. They are shifted from one place to another quite often which sometimes leads to behavioral disorders in the animals as they have to constantly adapt to new surroundings. If you look at elephants, they move in a herd from one place to another. But in a zoo, they are placed in different cages and are not allowed to move freely. The act of pacing is known to relieve stress in animals and not being able to do so adds to their anxiety. Wild animals live longer than their Zoo counterparts. Not in all zoos animals are treated nicely. They are teased, thrown things at by tourists. In many developing countries, zoo officials are not trained and are just trying to make money to feed their families. Many zoos don’t have the money to keep animals, e.g. elephants are expensive to keep. When these animals are released into the wild, they find it really hard to survive because they have been fed till date having no experience to find their own food.
Then why do we need modern zoos? We need zoos because they play a crucial role in wildlife conservation. With increasing population and deforestation, the wild animals are losing their territory to roam freely and many are on the verge of extinction. With globalization, zoos have evolved too. Now animals are not caged but provided an environment similar to the wild and are taken care of really well. People get a chance to study animals closely. A lot of injured animals are rescued, given medical attention and released into the wild again once they are fit and healed. Zoos have successfully saved some species from going extinct such as red wolf, California Condor, black footed ferret, Karner blue butterfly freshwater mussels, Arabian oryx, to name a few.
Many animals rights activists argue that zoos should be banned as the rights of the animals are violated. But the fact that zoos have successfully saved many endangered species can’t be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to hunt'.
Suggestion: to hunt
... which lead to their inability to learn hunting in the wild. They are caged and kept aw...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d kept away from their natural habitat. They are shifted from one place to another q...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'right'.
Suggestion: right
...bian oryx, to name a few. Many animals rights activists argue that zoos should be ban...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., if, look, really, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.5418719212 237% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1207.87684729 147% => OK
No of words: 372.0 242.827586207 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7876344086 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51103904563 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 139.433497537 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 12.6551724138 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2605723403 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2083333333 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237343168914 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845039919482 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073311207779 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18838698516 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302712490685 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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