Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades. Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s and 1970s, Mars is 150 times further away from Earth than the Moon is
The article states that the project of sending humans to Mars is need to solving the perplexed problems
than Moon project did not have to face and solve. and provide three reasons for support.
However the professor explains that trip to mars is a challenging commute, but it is a possible and practicable, and refutes each author's reasons.
First, the reading states that the cargo capacity to sending the survival requirement such as food, water, and oxygen is limited, so crew can not survive during two years, the professor refutes this point by stating that the Hydroponic plant can compensate the food, water as well as oxygen requisites, The Hydroponic plant grow in water based habitat, it need not to a soil to grow, on the top of every things else, the Hydroponic plants not only absorb Co2, but also produce O2, and by doing so, it helps to maintain o2 level perfectly.
Second, the article claims that the zero gravity in mars could produce health anomaly such as a decreased muscle mass and lower bone density. However, the professor contends that human had a several lunch spacecraft to moon in zero gravity situation. hence, this problem has a several solution, to be more specific, the regular exercises, the Calcium pills would be useful to the bone density.
Third, the reading avers that the astronauts would be exposed to radiation of sun, and it is dangerous to body of human, so, this requires a shield to protect from sun radiation that makes spacecraft weightier than usual it is. the lecturer opposes this points by saying that this radiation is not dangerous all the time, this occasional radiation can compensated by construct a small shield in spacecraft in which after increasing radiation, astronauts can go through this shield immediately.
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- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet Mars some think 78
- The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water 85
- TOEFL TPO 16 - Integrated Writing Task 88
- When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to solve'?
Suggestion: need to solve
...he project of sending humans to Mars is need to solving the perplexed problems than Moon proj...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e perplexed problems than Moon project did not have to face and solve. and prov...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...roject did not have to face and solve. and provide three reasons for support. How...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...and provide three reasons for support. However the professor explains that trip to mar...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...ver the professor explains that trip to mars is a challenging commute, but it is a p...
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Line 9, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...raft to moon in zero gravity situation. hence, this problem has a several solution, t...
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Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...ty situation. hence, this problem has a several solution, to be more specific, the regular exer...
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Line 9, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem has a several solution, to be more specific, the regular exercises, the Cal...
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Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the regular exercises, the Calcium pills would be useful to the bone density. ...
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Line 12, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...spacecraft weightier than usual it is. the lecturer opposes this points by saying...
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Line 12, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is. the lecturer opposes this points by saying that this radiation is not danger...
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Line 12, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... all the time, this occasional radiation can compensated by construct a small shi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01006711409 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58643864802 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.606820907 49.2860985944 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.888888889 110.228320801 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 21.698381199 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116241297494 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055581321839 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619907854725 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751708536214 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433064261568 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.3589403974 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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