What is the role of the government in health care?
discuss both of view
Gonvernment have a policy to deal with the quality of people's health. Local authorities take responsibility on public health care by promoting health community and assuring health service.
Health authority prevents disease spreading by campaigning health information. Why does this happen? this because people prior to have not known about the vulnerable disease, causing deaths and suffering ill. since there is health news by health institution, people can overcome theirhealth. Japan health institution has annouced mask use during covid-19 and washing a hand after going to outside home, conducted through youtube and tiktok, and society do health instruction based on news spreaded. Thus, Japanese confirmed covid-19 decreased death rate related on the virus, with around 20% compared to in the past without health news. Local government and health authoritis will not need more financial for health promotion programm, if elder people can be carefull on virus spreading.
Gonvernment should be enggaged in availability of health related on service and health care. Patients have a lack of accesibility to make an appointments with doctors or health staff, but by cooperating government and health professionals, health officials can give a holistic medical attention for patients in emergency situation without appointments. Health ministry and government of Americans have applied online health servise in which people are easier to consult on health service consulting with doctor based on people need, and indonesian almost 20% of patients acquire identification of their whole sickness so that patient can access health issue. Therefore, If medical staffs ignore to spend time on public service, patients are reluctant going to hospitals, suffering from illness.
To conclude, role of gonvernment coorporated with health institution are to make a policy for which by giving more attention on promoting and services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...alth information. Why does this happen? this because people prior to have not known ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ease, causing deaths and suffering ill. since there is health news by health institut...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an appointment' or simply 'appointments'?
Suggestion: an appointment; appointments
...nts have a lack of accesibility to make an appointments with doctors or health staff, but by co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71972318339 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90512404085 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7299263584 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234798060411 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955607709017 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646357675529 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158535269119 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037743911446 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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