Many people think that money is important to achieve Happiness. What is the importance of money to happiness?
Give reasons to your answer and include examples from your experience.
It is an undeniable fact that happiness is a state of mind which is driven by various factors. However, it is believed by a vast section of society that
money plays significant role to be happy. In my discourse ahead, this essay will enunciate upon how rupees make people jubilant with supporting ideas and examples.
To begin, it seems that strong financial position facilitates materialistic lifestyle. This means to say that it is dreamed by majority to live and enjoy in
dwelling which is well equipped with contemporary gadgets and latest amenities. Achievement of such dream certainly brings happiness in ones life, and it would be only possible if one has enough money. Take for an example, as per survey conducted by the psychology department of Cambridge university in 2019 on state of mind revealed that those who have achieved dreams owing to strong financial capability were more happy compared to others who were struggling to earn money. Thus, it is an obvious to believe that money plays pivotal role in achieving goals which bring happiness.
Additionally, financial ability keeps people healthy by various ways which make them more joyful. This is because money makes it possible to cure life-threatening disorders. A best illustration is an recent article published in Economic Times showed that only 15% patients having strong financial condition in Singapore were able to bear high cost of medicines and expensive therapy to treats serious illnesses such as liver dysfunction, cancer, which ultimately made them happy once cured. Consequently, monetary status brings happiness by keeping healthy.
To conclude, by considering above discussion, this essay discussed how money upgrades lifestyle and keeps healthy which ultimately brings more happiness in life. People should work hard to strengthen financial condition to live life with enjoyment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, then, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39455782313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8583249903 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5429084893 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15258631603 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562129207179 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373397480141 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730331694351 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437989212723 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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