Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It's said that living in a foreign country where you can't use your mother tongue may lead to significant social and practical problems. This essay will show some ideas to claim that the author is totally agree with the mentioned statement.
Using any language apart from the familiar one always cause difficulty as language users aren't used to them. For instance, the lack of vocabulary might make speakers find hard to explain their ideas, therefore can lead to accidental problems such as misunderstood situations or even more serious. People with language difficulty have a high rate of depression and stress since they can't communicate properly with others. Other issues caused from difficulty in using language may occur such as loneliness and bullying.
Language is used in every aspect of life, so language difficulty can cause many practical problems followed by. You cannot catch up with not only the society around you but also education and work as your language is not good enough. You might end up with bad grades and low-income jobs, which also lead to mental health issues and financial difficulty. By only language problems, your life might go down to unacceptable low level.
In conclusion, it's definitely clear that using a foreign language in life can make a lot of disadvantages ranging from social to realistic ones. As a language learner, the author understand the possible downsides, therefore this statement remains the truth in many practical cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...eas to claim that the author is totally agree with the mentioned statement. Using...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ways cause difficulty as language users arent used to them. For instance, the lack of...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ate of depression and stress since they cant communicate properly with others. Other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17916666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65439559452 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5155876588 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325753382984 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109181960037 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530534861685 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189645446439 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044613876962 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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