computers can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is waste of time to learn a foreign language.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, new technologies, such as the internet, computers, and smartphones have become an integral part of our lives and make our life more easy and convenient. one of these new technologies is machine translation that could produce texts that are readable and understandable to some extent, and they are getting better. So there are some people who believe that with these new developments, there is no need in learning new languages in the near future. I completely disagree with this view.
To begin with, firstly, being bilingual or multilingual have several benefits. Learning a second language is a great way to keep our brain healthy and sharp. It could help a person’s ability of multi-tasking skills, attention control, problem-solving, and creativity as it could promote outside-the-box thinking. Recent studies reveal that bilingual people’s brains age more slowly and therefore, they live longer and more satisfying. It is widely recognized that being bilingual can delay neurological diseases like Alzheimer’s.
Secondly, language has more important purposes than translations, the most important reason why people decide to learn a foreign language is that makes them able to communicate with people (#with) of different nationalities. Learning new languages enables them to understand new cultures and establish closer links with local people. However, even the best translation software could not translate cultures. Each culture has different lexical, like slangs, idioms, and proper nouns that are unique to that specific culture, however, computers are not able to understand and recognize them. computers also could not help foreigners to communicate with native people because they could not analys tone of voice body language also directly inform a speaker’s intent.
In conclusion, learning a second language is very beneficial for the social and individual development of the people. I disagree with the idea that computers will be able to eliminate the need of learning foreign languages because of important applications of language and machine errors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60377358491 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0480248166 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7818937988 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215010167178 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726321641061 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644858985321 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142818061268 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785420562146 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.