In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
owadays advanced methods of farming increase the rate of agricultural products more than ever in the past .Having said that ,some people struggle for food .Although various reasons lie behind that ,there are also some straightforward measures we can take to address the issue.
Regarding to the principal reasons of this issue ,perhaps the most major factor is fiscal problems.That is to say , in underprivileged societies not only citizens suffer from financial uncertainty ,but also governments struggle as well. In these countries due to lack of resources such as oil nations suffer from numerous economic problems. To illustrate this,people who are living in some African countries such as Malawi and Uganda are a good example of that .Hot and dry weather, what is more,is the next significant reason. As a result of that cultivation in these part of the world is not as good as others. Therefore, poverty is fundamental problem of these nations and they are still hungry despite of innovation advanced technology all over the world.
In terms of taking some actions to deal with this issue, probably the first measure is that affluent societies should aid destitute ones based on humanitarian principles. Sending prepared food and other edible products is one of the crucial actions to support impoverished families. For instance, charity organizations can paly an important role in this pivotal act for sending donations to given areas. .Sellers ,in addition, should sale their goods before discarding to assist poor individuals since they cannot afford to buy even basic necessities . It is one of the simple ways to aid hungry citizens.
To sum up, l take the view that helping unwealthy countries should be of paramount importance of every privileged society to assist deprived nations for eradicate poverty all over the world. With such a inexorable velocity of advanced technology nobody should be hungry in modern day .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, what is more, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23225806452 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85243581568 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9066605699 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178163214508 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566856418398 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432158035908 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958151004963 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286087734629 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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