As mass communication and transport continue to grow,societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Globalization means opening the gate for other nation to come and set up their business or any other work in any country.For the widspread of this phenomenon,known as globalisation.Growing mass communication and increased modes of transport are the factors behind it. I totaly depart with the given statement that globalization will lead to total loss of cultural identity rether it is making our culture more rich and vibrant.As i will elucidate my views in below paragraphs.
How it is making our culture more diverse?To commence with, as globalization provide opportunities to go to any country ...
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- As mass communication and transport continue to grow societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity Do you agree or 75
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as globalization provide opportunitie
as globalization provides opportunities
the dwellers of host nation gets attracted towards our nation.
the dwellers of host nation get attracted towards our nation.
Sentence: Globalization means opening the gate for other nation to come and set up their business or any other work in any country.For the widspread of this phenomenon,known as globalisation.Growing mass communication and increased modes of transport are the factors behind it.
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Sentence: I totaly depart with the given statement that globalization will lead to total loss of cultural identity rether it is making our culture more rich and vibrant.As i will elucidate my views in below paragraphs.
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Sentence: Moreover, it is human tendency to get attracted towards any thing new that we observe .In annexation, the people of the host country also come to know about our culture .With time, this thing leads to create freternity among people coming from totaly different backgrounds.
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Sentence: Second major reason why i dissent with the statement . culture is something that we acquired from our ancesestors, that is beings continued from centuries in every one's family.
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Sentence: In other word, it depends on the up-brining of a persons.
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Sentence: Rather globalization makes a person to experience various cultures and if we embrace the good values of any culture, it makes us a better humam being.
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Sentence: On the contrarient side, some people fear that globalisation will lead to total loss of our cultural identity.
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Sentence: They might ponder that our culture will vanish completlly.
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Sentence: As per my above confabulation, it is axiometic that culture is not somthing that change in every five year.It is moral values accorded by a person.
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