As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 350 words.
The twenty-first century has commenced with the efflorescence of communication and transportation, whose momentary international traveling time empowered different societies to live with each other. Such closeness raises an apprehension that cultures may be assimilated to one, putting cultural identity on the wane. From my perspective, this notion is founded and this essay will delve deeper into the harms of globalization regarding this matter.
It is clear that today’s development, especifically globalization, greatly bolstered cultural integration. Amelioration of transports, such as airplanes, allowed people of diversifying origins to travel back and forth to one another, bringing with them their cultural values. Examples for this include the emergence of eastern communities within the United States such as Chinatowns that allowed Americans to enjoy Chinese food or increasing prevalence of fast food in Asian countries. Furthermore, the culmination of the technological revolution gave birth to the Internet which also further accelerated this process. Japan is a prominent example here, whose anime are gaining an increasing popularity among Western fans, helping to advertise a better Japanese image and attracting visitors to the home country.
Considering the integrations aforementioned, globalization may lead to a stripping away of cultural identity. It will lead to a breakdown in social interaction at a local level which is a vital element of cultural identity, because people will have more time being in contact with foreigners and being affected by their culture. In addition, families in a globalized society would be scattered all around the globe and be making decisions through virtual meetings instead of converging into one place. Furthermore, the phenomenon’s effect on communication will also be far reaching where culturally specific languages and dialects are no longer needed because a common language is needed. Religious values and customs are also not exempt which is not being favored in such a context, such as the dying out of Confucianism. Lack of familial and social bondings along with lack of distinct language and religions would then homogenize people into one culture and thus, what makes one stand out - their culture - will be nonexistent.
In conclusion, witnessing ongoing cultural amalgamation, I believe that concern regarding loss of identity stands to reason.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72576177285 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23377023292 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628808864266 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5570861047 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181041322091 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057153560218 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488241605589 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975174607362 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541946636253 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.