Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
humanities is very important in building ones general knowledge and students in business and sciences should of course take courses in humanities. humanities deals with human existence in general, it comprises of areas such as history, laws, geography, religion, etc. which will help broaden the general communication level of a student regardless of his/her major.
A typical example of the importance of such knowledge can be seen in the case of a business personel who finds him self in a foreign land trying to negotiate a business deal for his company, his knowledge on the history of this land and the way of life of the people will go a long way in his ability to relate and communicate with the people of that region.
Also a science graduate who desires to take up a career in government, and has no knowledge of the basic concepts of humanities or how the government works will find it difficult to function effectively as he/she might be in a position to interract daily with a broad class of people who might not even understand the concept of science. his/her knowledge of humanities will be the saving grace in times like this.
Further more as a business or science graduate, a person might land a managerial role in his/her career and will be required to mange a diverse set of people, the ability to understand the way of life of various people will help in this role to bring out the best in his/her employees. When a maneger is knowledgeable in areas such as religion and ethnicity, it gives him better understanding of his/her employees. and avoid situations whereby emplyees might be assign duties that are against their beliefs.
The general knowledge of humanity as it is seen can relate to every aspect of our everyday life, and our ability to relate with people, so whether a stundent choose to undertake a career in business or art, in other to excel in the everyday aspect of life, basic knowledge of humanities will be of a great importance.
- The following appeared in a memo from the president of Bower Builders a company that constructs new homes A nationwide survey reveals that the two most desired home features are a large family room and a large well appointed kitchen A number of homes in o 66
- The following appeared in a health newsletter A ten year nationwide study of the effectiveness of wearing a helmet while bicycling indicates that ten years ago approximately 35 percent of all bicyclists reported wearing helmets whereas today that number i 60
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 66
- The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions Since they were declared a wildl 58
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humanities
humanities is very important in building ones gene...
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Suggestion: Humanities
...d of course take courses in humanities. humanities deals with human existence in general, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...als with human existence in general, it comprises of areas such as history, laws, geography,...
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Suggestion: Also,
...cate with the people of that region. Also a science graduate who desires to take ...
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Suggestion: His
...even understand the concept of science. his/her knowledge of humanities will be the...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ace in times like this. Further more as a business or science graduate, a perso...
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Suggestion: And
...ter understanding of his/her employees. and avoid situations whereby emplyees might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in general, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77842565598 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76447877571 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483965014577 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.98259119 60.3974514979 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.9 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196756391682 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921016168155 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903857895732 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115716741043 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731317372618 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.