In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses, for example, food and drink industry. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the development of the world, the popularity of plastic has arisen gradually due to its convenience and low cost. However, some people argue that its terrible impact on the environment is undeniable. Personally, I think that although this trend would introduce both pros and cons, the benefits do not outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is obvious that in practical application, the usefulness of plastic is massive. First to mention, it is economical for restaurants and companies to replace recyclable materials in their products with plastic. For instance, fast food chains have made use of this positive aspect, therefore, these companies can earn more profit. As a result, the customers can also enjoy their food and beverages at a low price. What is more, this substance is compact and lightweight, it will come in handy when people pack for camping, traveling or food deliveries.
On the other hand, we should not underestimate its crucial downside on the environment. Firstly, plastic products need centuries to decompose, eventually, landfills and ocean are filled up and stacked days after days, making the pollution worse. Secondly, the enormous amount of plastic waste dumped into the sea every year often ends up as microplastic, which is then absorbed by animal creatures, causing multiple diseases to them and to seafood consumers. Thirdly, the overproduction of plastic makes the depletion of oil happen faster. Since the transportation industry require huge amount of fossil fuel, this trend is putting the world to a tough challenge.
In conclusion, there are plus points to use plastic merchandises frequently. Nevertheless, it seems to me that the exploitation of this material is threatening lives on Earth severely in long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32028469751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99789062251 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661921708185 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4497056914 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1333333333 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159645702808 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466891960467 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365764143683 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825325113949 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437074576817 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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