Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go on the trip
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir/Madam,
It is stated, that I would like to join my son on his school trip that is going to turkey for three days. As I love this country and I always wanted to see it. When I heard about your school trip going to same country I made up my mind to join you on this exciting journey.
As I told you that I love to visit turkey is because my grand father was from turkey that is why I can understand Turkish. So this could be beneficial for you all I a way that I can translate their language to you all.
Also, I would like to enquire that is there any other translator or tourist guider you are keeping with you during the trip? And how many cities have you planned to cover in three days?
Looking for your quick response to my questions and I hope to see you all at the trip departure day.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs. Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... country and I always wanted to see it. When I heard about your school trip going to...
^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
... this could be beneficial for you all I a way that I can translate their language...
^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e trip departure day. Yours faithfully, Mrs. Smith.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12195121951 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16651412694 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.127212993 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319478257625 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125298716743 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071372238776 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180902582502 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878154100699 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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