Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A section of people opine that making high school kids study literature is waste of their valuable time. I disagree to an extent with opinion while learning STEM related subjects during our high school years is important but we might never find another opportunity to learn our rich literarure once we move on from high school.
Firstly, in today's modern society high school students are getting pressured on being more
competitive in schools and there is also a bigger push for only adding stem realted subjects to curriculum. In other words non-stem subjects like literature doesn't get that importance which is concerning. Students are stressed when they study Science and Technology related subjects they should get some breather by reading novels or poems which will boost their mind
and confidence levels by relasing stress and makes them be creative to learn technical subjects. For example, In my high school our we had a literature class replaced by math class
all the time and we where unable to concentrate on either because we where already burnt out learn more about same subject.
Secondly, I agree that reading too much litreature is a little waste of time in high school because we never come across questions like what is you favorite novel or poem in competitive
exams or admission interviews. Another reason being we try to make our children be more innovative than creative but on the contray both work hand in hand. For example, if you see
most of the innovation tech founders are book worms they love to read inspiration novels and
creative poems. One such example is Elon Musk founder of Tesla always try to innovate products
based on early literature with mix of science.
To conclude, as discussed above stem subjects can come in handy for getting into university but to relive stress and improve creativity students might need to spend some quality time on
litreature as well and find that balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ents are getting pressured on being more competitive in schools and there is also...
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...rature doesnt get that importance which is concerning. Students are stressed when they study ...
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...els or poems which will boost their mind and confidence levels by relasing stress...
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Suggestion: were
...aced by math class all the time and we where unable to concentrate on either because...
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...ble to concentrate on either because we where already burnt out learn more about same...
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...they love to read inspiration novels and creative poems. One such example is Elon...
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...of Tesla always try to innovate products based on early literature with mix of sc...
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...might need to spend some quality time on litreature as well and find that balance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02160493827 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49033147922 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3557988183 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.909090909 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315255345181 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113476348026 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792325872916 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943018249111 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792229031573 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.