People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
Who is not scared by thoughts about possible changes in live? It is believed, people resist taking steps changing their live by nature, and especially it is usual for modern world. Changes could lead to lose of what has been acquired over the years, moreover, some individuals cannot manage new things and eventually they give up and lost hope and faith. In order to cope with issues that changes could bring there are several suggestions. First, people need to be prepared well to unstable temporary life. Second, people should plan their steps more carefully and not to hesitate asking help.
There is a big risk to lose a lot when you make changes in your life. By this I mean, all saved money could gone when person switches from one professional field to another, or you need to restart career and start from the scratch with lower salary. For example, every year millions of people move in other countries, a lot of refugees are among them. Those people who escaped from motherland have to start a new life without background required in new country. Whole lot of time is needed to find a feet, especially for refugees. In order to cope with this it is recommended to set some money aside beforehand, to gain knowledge in desired working field.
Furthermore, after making changes people realize that the decision was a mistake, because they just cannot deal with new reality. For instance, after divorce some individuals fail in living by they own and in taking care of children. It would lead to stress, depression and anxiety. In order to be ready for this serious step person should plan every action and ask help if it needed. Huge number of helping center exist nowadays. And thanks to modern technologies, here and there a lot of life couching courses are suggested with purposes of teaching time management and so on.
To conclude, changes could bring issues that fraightenen people, causing temporary lose either money or accomodation, or causing disability to manage new life. Solutions for these problems are linked with well preparation, whether it is saving money, or getting new knowledge and skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have gone' or 'go'?
Suggestion: have gone; go
.... By this I mean, all saved money could gone when person switches from one professio...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: Lot
...out background required in new country. Whole lot of time is needed to find a feet, espec...
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Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a foot' or simply 'feet'?
Suggestion: a foot; feet
...ry. Whole lot of time is needed to find a feet, especially for refugees. In order to c...
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Line 2, column 501, Rule ID: FOOT_FEET[1]
Message: 'foot' is the singular form of 'feet'. Consider using 'foot'?
Suggestion: foot
.... Whole lot of time is needed to find a feet, especially for refugees. In order to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89722222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50658238383 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8552120056 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.15 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190092475051 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515864184597 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409120214995 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111338164271 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441457744585 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.