In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it has become more essential to work both men and women to survive. In this globe, many countries both gender working whole day. it is widely believed that house chores should be shared between men and women equally.
To begin with, It is essential to work hard for men to share household chores. In this fast paced era, men had no other time to chill. Whole day men have to perform best at their workplace to survive their life. Also It has been said that men are the backbone of family and every member of the family is dependent on men.
Moreover, In many counties women also working full time. Women are the womb of men. In many firms women perform well than men. Now women are easily seen making the key policies of big MNCs, sitting on the board of big organizations etc which results in they do not get sufficient time to devote at home. Thus, it is logical to share household chores evenly between men and women at the home.
It is clearly seen that In today's era gender differences almost gone. Both men and women having an equal part to share household chores and for logical reasons. Sharing household work also reduces pressure from both genders. Also working full time enables both men and women to be independent.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, work is imperative in this inflation era. However, still I believe that both genders must share join responsibility of everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73577235772 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40623281816 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.498178452 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7222222222 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495509478483 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176386930288 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102842648614 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277879456961 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113064349606 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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