In many countries, women and men are working full time. It is, therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At the present, the majority of women and men are working out full-time in order to take care of their family in most countries. Therefore, some people argue that it is logical for both genders to share households, and I completely agree with this statement by expressing my notion in the following paragraphs with direct examples, before a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, it is indisputable fact that there still exists on some families that only men work and females will be busy with house works. For instance, men did not perform any household in the past, and women did house works, take care of their children instead of doing business. However, at this time, the thinking of humans has completely changed to compare to the past and there is not any discrimination in some families between opposite genders about performing households. Mainly because nowadays, finding money is becoming quite complicated work in some cities. Therefore, most of the young families have to work full time.
On the other hand, it is the pattern of respect that reciprocating house works. That is because this gives the responsibility to a person and reminds that women who have their own rights can work efficiently as men. For example, the statistics illustrate that the majority of the male genders want to dominate and will be strong rather than females. Furthermore, it is accurate that men dislike doing house works, however, if they sometimes assist women, it would be the best way to avoid varieties of scandals among genders.
In conclusion, it is evident that discrimination still exists in some countries, but if people avoid it by supporting each other, the world would be much peaceful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...jority of women and men are working out full time in order to take care of their family i...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...most of the young families have to work full time. On the other hand, it is the pattern ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73559598983 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8825364312 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271325492981 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975903010422 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764666080523 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152283075801 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903701456592 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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