The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.
The graph compares how the amount of private transportation as motor every 1,000 residents among 8 worldwide countries in 1990 and the first year of the 21st century. Overall, it is clear that there were the significant differences in the numbers of people using motor during the time research, and while we can see an downward trend in Bahamas, the number of remaining nations seems to grow.
Looking the information in more detail, in 1990, 548 people in Lusumalla opted for motorcycle as a main transportation which was the highest number compared to other countries. It is followed by New Zealand which stood at 531 citizens, while the number of Bahamas was much less (just 235 people). Moreover, Chile and Romania’s figure shared the similar quantities ( around 68 residents). In comparison with the aforementioned countries, the two remaining areas fooled a different pattern. It is notable that around a half of residents in Jordan drove motorcycles, but this pattern was completely reversed in Cambodia.
By contrast, figures in 2000 differed noticeably. A striking point to note is that while the trend of Brazil and Jordan were nearly triple, the number of Bahamas people used private motorbikes considerably decline by 50 out of 1000 people. The number of Cambodia, on the other hand, remained stable at the least amount. As for the remaining nations, there are some similarities among Chile, Lusumalla, New Zealand and Romania. These trends depicted a marginal rise, ranging from 12 to 200 for each nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a’s figure shared the similar quantities around 68 residents. In comparison with ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...lar quantities around 68 residents. In comparison with the aforementioned countries, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83076003811 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6312238972 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123525475214 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408697061119 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453066316956 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090620784451 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557490315441 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.