Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
In your letter,
explain why you changed jobs
, describe your new job
, tell him/her your other news
Dear lilian,
I hope you are doing great and Sarah is growing strong. I am writing this letter to share the good news with you about my new job.
As you are aware, my old job location was a great distance from my house, so I struggled with commuting to and fro. However, with my new job, I do not have to worry about that anymore. Also, you recall when we had a conversation about my intention to return to my original accounting career from my former sales job, this allowed me an opportunity to finally switch jobs.
My new job focus mainly on accounting roles like reporting and financial analysis. It comes with a very attractive remuneration package, an official car, and comfortable accommodation. My colleagues are amiable gracious which makes the working environment friendly.
Another exciting news is that I will be hosting a house party on the 30th of next month to celebrate my new accommodation and the job offer. I would be thankful if you could make time to attend as I have missed you so much and wish to see you.
Let me know when you are coming so that I can prepare for your visit and say hi to Sarah.
Best wishes,
Ann.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear lilian, I hope you are doing great and Sarah is ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60765550239 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60942392079 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6178796617 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199488052693 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725804896793 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621844010679 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116862324041 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484500392535 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.