Some people consider that working in favorite profession is more substantial and great than earning much money whereas others regard satisfactory wages is more significant than lovely work. In this essay I am going to assimilate both types of people and then submit my own conviction.
People who prefer working in liking jobs are people who choose to enjoy their life. There are such people who do not wish and want to sacrifice themselves for pieces of paper scilicet for money. For example, to wake up for minion work is better and preferably than for unloved and nasty profession which do not suit for you. When you work in liking job you will have a motivation to work better and effectively so there are will appear new ideas. Moreover, you will not be upset on the contrary you will be in a good mood and positive.
However, working for good salary also has certain benefits. When a person has large amount of money in his pocket he will be able to acquire original and best presents for close people and friends likewise not for only other people but he will also capable to provide himself and his family. As well you will be able to do your favorite occupations which require large resources. You can calmly travel around the world without worry that your financial opportunities can finish.
To conclude, people are divided into two types who choose their favorite profession with small amount of salary and people who think that good salary is more important than liking job. My opinion that there is superiorly to work in desirable work, it is more substantial than unpleasant work despite of wages.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-15 | Садуш Йулдашева | 56 | view |
- In today s world children are indolent supine and passive in their leisure time than in backward accordingly physical training must be obligatory in schools There are points for and against this idea so in this essay I will write about both sides and give 56
- Some people think that artists demand a definite liberty to improve their abilities others consider that they should have full freedom to signify their imagination and talents In this essay I am going to narrate about both types of people and in the end g 56
- The given bar chart shows the of people who can read and write namely the literacy rate by region and gender in 2011
- Some people consider that working in favorite profession is more substantial and great than earning much money whereas others regard satisfactory wages is more significant than lovely work In this essay I am going to assimilate both types of people and th 56
- This century is century of technologies based on this now the internet influences on people s lives on the score of that it is more desired than TV broadcasts I concur with this thought therefore in this essay I will write about positive and negative side 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...able to provide himself and his family. As well you will be able to do your favori...
^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than unpleasant work despite of wages.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68803418803 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33180266628 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9997362398 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212794619937 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088080171827 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773696964002 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173421630114 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101443275768 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.