You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
– describe the incident
– explain how this incident affected you
– suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to report an incident I experienced last week Tuesday on the 965 train which traumatized me.
My name is Lilian and I am one of your frequent customers. I stay in Boston and have been using your train services for about 10 years now.
On Tuesday, last week, while travelling to Boston from New York in bus 965, I observed that more than 135 persons were sold tickets to board the train, forcing 6 people to use a seat and a few left standing. Not only this, the driver allowed people into the bus without a face shield or a face mask, endangering the lives of commuters by exposing them to the risks of the Pandemic. Besides, these actions defile the Covid guidelines and regulations.
I am so worried about this situation because about 2-3 people were coughing and sneezing on the bus and after my travelling, I have been feeling symptoms of cough, cold, and fever. These are symptoms of Covid and I fear for the safety of my family since it is highly contagious. This has disturbed me a lot.
Going forward, to prevent this situation from recurring, I simply suggest that all your staff be thoroughly briefed on the Covid guidelines and regulations. Also, they should be made aware of the risks that are associated with the pandemic, how to ensure that all passengers wear their face masks and maintain social distance. I will be grateful if this is achieved.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Warm regards,
Lilian.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to report an in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58706921201 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9869196009 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145175958064 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478179069332 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524773978193 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088501760055 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644021750037 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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