People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.
Some people think that criminals should be sentenced to long term imprisonment as a measure to reduce the crime rates in the society, whereas others believe that there are many alternative ways to deal with them which would be more feasible in the long run. I believe depending upon the severity of the crime, sentences should be handed out. In the following paragraphs I will discuss both the views and state my opinion.
On the one hand, people believe that sentencing criminals to long term prison confinement will help to decrease the crime rate. When imprisoned those who are not professional criminals or have simply started to head towards the crime world may reflect on their action and mend their ways and therefore wouldn’t need to remain in prison for a long time. On the contrary, the ones that have been in the field, for instance, gang leaders, drug suppliers or murders for a long time should be sentenced to lifetime imprisonment and should be monitored strictly so that they cannot continue to operate from within.
On the other hand, several alternative measures can be adopted to reach the goal. Firstly, the government could appoint agencies to find out the reason on how the person became a criminal. Secondly, these petty criminals could be given jobs like police or field agents as they would be the best person to detect and catch similar people thereby reducing the crime rates. For example, there was a show that demonstrated how cops took help from a criminal to catch other criminals thereby giving the latter a free life as well as a secure job as an undercover agent.
To sum up, I believe that sentences should be delivered based on the severity of the crime and adopting alternative methods like giving jobs may further aid in reduction of crimes in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85113268608 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51876421808 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2178972586 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.272727273 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300839218339 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11383020618 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594268915676 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189074947214 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582952699275 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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