the map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
The given both road map in combination compare the road infrastructure around city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
To begin with, in 2007, bust stop was located in both side of hospital road, which was no longer exist now. The new reconstructed bus station was connected with ring road, cityroad and hospital road via two new roundabout.
Similarly, before in 2007, there was combined parking area for public and staff near to the east bus stop, but now the parking facilities was separated for hospital staff and public. However, the staff parking was at the same place but public parking was newly built in the east of the city hospital connected with ring road.
Overall, as the both layout describe, the three major changes was made in 2010 as compare to 2007. The two new roundabouts, new public vehicle station and separate parking facilities for public and hospital. While, the new highway seems to be easily access to the hospital to all patients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'roundabout' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'roundabouts'.
Suggestion: roundabouts
... cityroad and hospital road via two new roundabout. Similarly, before in 2007, there w...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing facilities for public and hospital. While, the new highway seems to be easily acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, similarly, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93865030675 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45507644561 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9255509887 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266259852939 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136784280883 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11635497408 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204194482293 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129027584391 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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