Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a strong argument that having a good rule of law is essential for the smooth functioning of society. I tend to completely agree with this view, however, I believe that there are some occasions that reducing regulations can bring positive effects on both society and individuals.
On the one hand, I believe reducing regulations can contribute to some positive effects. for example, most people hate to work in an environment that has strict regulations, and there is someone who always reminds them of the terms and tells them what to do. so if they give more freedom and autonomy, they may not only feel more motivated, but they are more likely to flourish in their roles. Moreover, reducing regulations also can promote innovation and creativity. As an instance, when governments impose fewer regulations on the design of new houses, people are enabled to use their creativity and imaginations to build unique and modernized houses that can make the city visually appealing.
On the other hand, I advocate the idea that a strong rule of law is vital for the smooth operation and sustainable development of a country. empirical evidence has shown that the weak role of low is a major hindrance to social and economic progress. without good governance and rule of law, corruption is nurtured in every tier of governments that would affects businesses operations, investments, employments, and consequently the quality of people’s lives. Rules also are necessary because they ensure safety in society and guarantee the basic rights of people.
In conclusion, while I accept that reducing regulations on some aspects can coutribute to the further development of society, in general, society could not survive without rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21352313167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91218468596 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8860912804 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145592136903 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455660634142 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370802803695 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792077969791 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196639183023 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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