museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
By the advent of globalization, the diversity has taken a back seat. Hence it is asserted by some that galleries should exhibit heritage of their own region, while, others contradict it. I sincerely concur the former facet to be logical for the sake of preserving the culture and to maintain uniqueness in nations.
Shedding light on the prominent causes of displaying one’s own culture is its preservation. By the dint of modernization, masses, to experience variation, are getting allured towards foreign styles, and are making distance from their own traditions. Therefore, presence of historic buildings will assist in retaining the richness of that particular region and may divert the mind of their citizens. To exemplify, Punjab youths started western clothes, nonetheless, with the establishment of heritage fairs, it has again started praising their heritage and feel proud of it.
Reinforcing the initial view, maintaining uniqueness could the other pivotal factor behind the above tendency. Owing to which, site seers may get attracted and will desire to explore the other culture. This will enable visitors to visit the respective nation, and will work fortunes for the economy of the country. This phenomenon will surge the tourism of places, and will help in becoming self-reliant. As cited in an article in ‘The Tribune’ that 70% of the nation has started digging their land to explore historical items which can be kept for exhibition, enabling to increase their financial status exorbitantly.
Having analyse the whole scenario, it can be recapitulated that showcasing one’s own uniqueness can act as a booster for the nation by attracting other populace as well as in retaining their own culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90886665049 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3385309347 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133974252373 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449448044873 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387751818426 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08349496875 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197874935084 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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