Some people believe that the earth is being damaged by human activity. Others feel this activity makes the earth a better place to live in. Discuss both views and state your view.
Discovering water on Mars was a difficult task for astronauts, whereas planet earth has all the possibilities for livelihood.We humans have various thoughts on how activities of people can either harm or make the Earth a better place to live.
The ensuing paragraph analyse both views and try to evolve a logical conclusion.
First of all, the spread of new automobile industries creates the problem of air and water pollution, which has terrible effect on human heath. For example, china is one of the largest place where the air pollution in a severe issue,in fact all the citizens living there use mask when they go out. This is due for all the factories that spill their scorias not only in the sea but also in the atmosphere, creating a toxic cloud above the cities and bringing death to all the marine species that live in the sea.
On the other hand, we humans cannot deny that some advancements in technology gives us more convenient things such as roads and cars by which we can travel to places as and when required. It is very eminent that the developing ideas on smartphones have reduced the work for humans with various applications helping us to solve the problems. To cite an example, Earlier people used to go out to buy food but in recent days there are various applications to deliver the food at your door step. But these smartphones also emits some rays which are harmful for birds and humans as well.
In conclusion, this essay has aptly emphasized that the human activity is harming the planet.So everyone should hink in sustainable activities that allows to develop without damage to our "Home".
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Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
...k in sustainable activities that allows to develop without damage to our 'Home'....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83985765125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68232517655 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1104876783 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245806330149 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795311295472 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652425505699 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127923319938 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637751604279 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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