When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that the architect should prioritize the function rather than the exterior appearance when erecting a building. I partly agree with this view, while the purpose is important, we should create harmonization between the internal and external decoration.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that the purpose of a building is the key factor when constructing it. To be more specific, each building has its own practical use, so it should be designed to meet the requirements of the owner. For example, a skyscraper should be equipped with the essential systems and adequate emergency exits to ensure safety and convenience for users. In case of fire or earthquake, disastrous consequences could happen if the structure of the building was not carefully considered before.
On the other hand, a magnificent-looking structure can bring a wide range of benefits that should be taken into consideration. First of all, it can raise the commercial value of the building. For example, a shopping center with an appealing outward decoration could attract more customers than the normal one, as a result, could generate enormous revenue for the owner. Secondly, designing a building with modernized architecture might be a clear testament to an advanced civilization. Take London as an example, this city is renowned for many special design buildings, such as The Gherkin or Big Ben Tower, etc., which become tourist traps and contribute much to the national budget. Last but not least, the outward design of a construction somehow could have a positive impact on its function, such as maximizing the air ventilation and the influx of natural sunlight, etc.
In conclusion, I agree that it is very important to focus on the inner function of a building, but this is by no means that the aesthetic factor of it could be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07565789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00799481518 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585526315789 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1017118887 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19742861373 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684958587456 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584779897866 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114205068063 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324190347571 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.