You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter:
– What is the problem?
– What have you done about it?
– What would you like the landlord
Dear Mr Zukerburg,
All things were good until last month when some students from Alberta have shifted in apartment number 102. I am
writing this letter to bring to your notice the disturbance from these neighbors and hope you would take necessary actions.
Despite the strict guidelines of the apartment to maintain silence at night time, I have observed that boys living next right to my accommodation have created too much noise at the night time which does not allow me to sleep properly. Moreover, during weekends, they invite their university friends and make noise throughout the day by singing songs loudly.
Primarily, in order to solve this issue, I talked them personally and informed how their such behavior negatively affects me and others living in the same building. I am surprised to see that despite verbal warning, they continue to do similar acts which needs your attention.
I would really appreciate if you interfere in this matter, and I want you to solve this matter legally. For the same, legal notice should be given by taking secretary of the building in the loop. If problem continues, ask management to take strict actions against them.
Hope you would understand the seriousness of the issue and take actions at earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Nirav Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Zukerburg, All things were good un...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11267605634 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54344862428 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5070161234 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209355352967 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737660274555 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705607592877 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101373216541 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785850725103 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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