The environmental problems that todays world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation, So the governemnt and large organsiaotn should be responsble fo reducing the amoutn of damage being done tot he environemet. do what extent do you agree or disagree
The increasing environment issues is a cause for concern. Nowadays, environmental issues like global warming have become bigger and more crucially impacted than at any time in the past. Some opine that authorities, large firms and manufacturers can play a fundamental role in reversing the damages done to the environment while ordinary people have little to contribute. This essay completely agres that the onus should be on the Govt to disrepair this adverse effect.
To begin with, the effortless contribution of common man has an insigniaficant impact to the envinormnetal degradation, and so the govt ought to undertake responsibilities to reduce this detrimental effect. While people have reduced the usage of plastics by introducing bio-degradeable products, Government has taken various steps to conserve the forest reserves. To cite an example a recent study suggested that around 8% of deforestation has been reduced on account of the latest regualatoins imposed by local bodies.
On the other hand individuals cannot do much to situation on account of their limitations, similarly governments rules and regulations do not have wider perspective in mind including proper resources, finances to carry out and as a result the eco complicaotns are exceeded. For example if factories stop releasing toxic waste in to the environment without any treatment which emits co2, the environement woudl be less harmful. Accoriding to the worlds nature conservation survey industrial wastes are the key reason for the contemporary ecological collapse, and comprises of 70% of words polluiton.
In short, this essay completely agreed that the govt should take stringent measures to preserve the environment and avoid tragic consequences to Mother Nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...oudl be less harmful. Accoriding to the worlds nature conservation survey industrial w...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...e contemporary ecological collapse, and comprises of 70% of words polluiton. In short, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, while, for example, in short, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58208955224 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23279929969 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5452230277 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152468492562 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046770283919 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405548807604 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749316242882 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420161411193 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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