Some people think that educated people are more valuable than people who have learned skills through experience.
Do you agree that educated people are the most valuable for society?
What kind of skills can people learn through experience that can benefit society?
It is commonly believed that a formal degree is a certificate for achievements and the significance of qualified people is more in comparison to others who have vast wisdom. I partly support the statement as this essay examines the facts closely and discusses traits that experience teaches.
Irrefutably, from early civilization to the modern era alma mater play a significant role in making student for the competence level. Education makes people subject matter experts, for instance, doctors, engineers, and so on. These people are often consulted for getting a piece of expert advice related to their fields, possess incredible respect among common folks, and earn a handsome six figure salary. Yet, I opine that academic attainment is not only a barometer of being valuable in society. Evidently, there are countless successful entrepreneur and outliers who were once a school dropout. Hence, it would be unfair to tag educated people as the most valuable for society.
There are numerous traits that could be learned through experience. Firstly, experience makes people more articulate in the light of vivid hues of life. They ingrain a sense of expression and communication skill that make a deep impact on the mind of their followers. Secondly, loads of knowledge regarding a particular process makes people risk-averse. Candidly speaking, the world has applauded those who have incorporated detailed analysis and practical aspects before taking the decision. Furthermore, based on the routine experience they become an instrument of cost-effectiveness and productivity.
In conclusion, though an academic certificate teaches an advanced level of the subjects, educated people as well as experienced ones, both are equally important in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'entrepreneurs'?
Suggestion: entrepreneurs
...idently, there are countless successful entrepreneur and outliers who were once a school dro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55390334572 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06025411742 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661710037175 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9999365079 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334624147108 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958828617762 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737315701384 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170743722701 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453202561003 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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