Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development?
The Internet has touched every facet of life and is available at the fingertips. With this advent of technology, many people rely on the internet to find a quick remedy for medical issues. I am convinced that this trend can pose serious threats and are unfavorable.
To begin with, in the paced life people like to have solutions just in a matter of seconds. So they depend on the internet to find medicines and solutions to alleviate any health issues they are facing, even without a proper consent from the doctor. This could totally deteriorate their health, as most of them search and take medicines based on their symptoms. Although, the traits for different types of flu were just common cold and cough, without knowing much they will take basic medication to reduce this disease. For example, the symptoms for common cold and COVID-19 are almost the same, only with proper medication and treatment with the concern of the doctor can mitigate the spread of such epidemic.
Additionally, the contents on the internet are not always reliable. Most of them just give out vague ideas and may not be complete, so it is not worth to depend completely only on the internet to find the best answer regarding health problems.On contrary, they can use the internet just to identify what can be the best precaution which can be taken in order to avoid the disease to an extent, but if sickness aggravates, it is best to consult a specialist rather than taking self medication by searching online.
To conclude, with the burgeoning use of the internet, nowadays people allure to use the internet to find rapid solutions to health issues, but I believe these trends have a negative impact on their life itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, second, so, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83276450512 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5410696619 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.560202034 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269828209218 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986245792845 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686888036083 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172015371031 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638968496317 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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