1. Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?
Someone has correctly said that “cars have become the important part of life without which we feel incomplete, uncertain and unclad”. The uses of car are increasing significantly. However, car has some harmful consequences but the advantages of cars outstrip its disadvantages.
On the one hand, car has only a few disadvantages. The increase in pollution, traffic jams and accidents occurs due to burgeoning population of cars. Furthermore, overdependence in cars leads to decrease in practices like walking and cycling therefore, increases the chances of health issues like heart attack and obesity.
On the other hand, the advantages of car are increasing sharply. Firstly, using car increases the freedom of movement. The ease of transportation that car provides is far better than any other means of transportation. People can move from destination to destination using cars and time is wasted in waiting bus or train. Therefore, distance and time is not barrier any more. Personal transport is more comfortable compared to public vehicle as it is over-crowding or disgusting. For instance, people can listen to the music, play with the kids, and stay cool, calm and comfortable inside the private vehicle and all these seems to be impossible in public transport. Secondly, families can travel a long distance using cars. Car is found to be more suitable for the family member who are sick, disable or elderly. Moreover, the automobile industries provide employment opportunities to millions of people. Filling stations, businesses and restaurant that serve for automobile traveller boost the economy of country. In the developing country, economy is found blooming through automobile based factories. Hence, Nepal government promotes the automobile manufacturing companies like TATA and Mahendra.
In conclusion, there are obvious few disadvantages of car but it has more advantages as it enhances the country economy and simultaneously improves the individual lifestyle. However, people should be conscious when and how car should be used in order to minimize the demerits to some extent.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o minimize the demerits to some extent.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49691358025 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14895142257 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7207942594 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8095238095 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158089879418 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510202474231 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592358193005 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110204608614 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427946155619 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o minimize the demerits to some extent.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49691358025 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14895142257 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7207942594 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8095238095 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158089879418 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510202474231 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592358193005 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110204608614 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427946155619 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.