The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resource like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?
The Earth's natural resources are facing depletion of natural resources, whilst the population of humans has surged to a new level which the earth couldn't burden anymore. In my opinion, there is one malignant consequence could be led, however, there are several methods could tackle with this issue of overpopulation.
The consequence which could entail by overpopulation is that the consumption of essential resources, for instance fossil fuels, fresh water and foods will be increased. This is to say, our resources will be depleted much faster as the population grows. In order to reduce the consumption of resources, authorities will adjust up the price to discourage people from buying them. Subsequently, the prices of these natural resources will be skyrocketed therefore the living quality of individuals will be dropped down as resources are no longer affordable for ordinary people.
However, there are few solutions which tackle the issue of overpopulation. Firstly, governments can implement birth control throughout countries in order to mitigate the birth rate of infants. For instance, the one-child policy in China has been scientifically proven to be effective to tackle with overpopulation, over the few decades, the growth speed of population has significantly slowed down which relieve the tension of exhausting resources at the moment. Secondly, sex education acts as a key to fight this issue as well, teenager should acknowledge both the importance of birth planning and use preventive instruments such as condom. Both methods would hopefully reduce the rate of birth to fight overpopulation.
In conclusion, the consequence of increasing population is detrimental upon the humanity nowadays. Nevertheless, if these implementations could be put into practice, this crisis of humanity can soon be relieved or even be resolved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56890459364 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20811862656 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2764366134 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174032507162 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592996207167 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380303965869 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103462730525 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314571177432 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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