always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Most people believe that honesty and telling the truth are important factors in any relationship that connect people with each other such as families, friends, husband and wife between any people. People see the relationship must be built on telling the truth. I believe that not telling the truth will may end this relationship.
First of all, trust is an important consideration in any relationship, and this trust can be gained by telling the truth. Nevertheless, trust issue can damage any relationship even a long one. I remember that, when I was 10 years old, I used to tell the truth to my friend Majed. I lied once to him to protect his feelings and by not telling him the truth. Eventually, I hurt him a lot and almost end our relationship. Moreover, when someone lie to his friend and he got hurt and disappointment, it won’t be easy to fix it.
In addition, most people believe in telling the truth will lead to a healthy relationship. These relationships can stand for years and they can face any issues if they are telling the truth. For example, I have a friend since I was 8 years old, we used to tell the truth to each other, and I talk to him until today. Furthermore, by telling the truth it will become easier when the two people are facing a difficult time.
To sum up, trust is an important factor in any relationship, and it can be gained by telling the truth. A good healthy relationship can stand for years even with facing problems and difficulties. Most people prefer a trusty healthy relationship in their lives.
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- integrated toefl writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'lies'.
Suggestion: lies
...ur relationship. Moreover, when someone lie to his friend and he got hurt and disap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64727272727 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81566808713 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472727272727 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6309261859 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.875 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494742472734 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183082250405 0.076458572812 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120751201671 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344077685332 0.150856017488 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102721513789 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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