some people think that studing from the past teaches us nothing about today's life, other argue that history is a valuable source of information. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is undinable truth that history provided valuable information about our culture. However, some people think that it is not important in today life. This easy intends to analysis both aspect and I agree with the former view.
Most of people belive that studying from the past has some advantages. To start with, first and foremost, it provides information about the our culture and what happand in the past. To elaborate, history gives information like how our freedom-fighter did somthing for country like Mahatma Gandhi did some protectst against the britishers, which people can learn from the historical books. Moreover, people can adopt the cultural value from the history.
However, other argue that people can not learn about the modren world from the past. In the technological era, the modern technology has increased dramatically and it is gives some precious information which not given by the history. For example, how to find such kind of things from the internet, that history can not tell ous. As a result, many people thing that it is not usfull to learn modern life from the past.
finally, I opine that teaching from the past life is more important to know about the our culture and the history about the country, but we can not lear about the modern technology from the history book.
to conclude, something that past time has some valuable information and other argue that it is not important in present life because of the technology increased. In my opinion history time is important for ous.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ct and I agree with the former view. Most of people belive that studying from the past has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...foremost, it provides information about the our culture and what happand in the past. T...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how our freedom-fighter did somthing for country like Mahatma Gandhi did some pro...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... to learn modern life from the past. finally, I opine that teaching from the past li...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...st life is more important to know about the our culture and the history about the count...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...rn technology from the history book. to conclude, something that past time has ...
^^
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ry book. to conclude, something that past time has some valuable information and other...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54979173826 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478431372549 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9626391029 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407944715001 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145798426102 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662881268203 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235206387881 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268989773753 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ct and I agree with the former view. Most of people belive that studying from the past has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...foremost, it provides information about the our culture and what happand in the past. T...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how our freedom-fighter did somthing for country like Mahatma Gandhi did some pro...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... to learn modern life from the past. finally, I opine that teaching from the past li...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...st life is more important to know about the our culture and the history about the count...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...rn technology from the history book. to conclude, something that past time has ...
^^
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ry book. to conclude, something that past time has some valuable information and other...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54979173826 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478431372549 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9626391029 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407944715001 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145798426102 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662881268203 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235206387881 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268989773753 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.